After a second tutorial with Sarah Geary, i also let her listen to my original song which i sang at open mic UK and she said similar views as Abbie as well, she worked out that on my high parts i was really competent in the vocals and that because i was so terrified and nervous you were able to tell that my low vocals wernt working as efficiently , because i wasn't concentrating on them as i was to nervous and concentrating on my nerves more than my performance , Sarah also mentioned about my pronounceation of words and diction wasnt correct so we tried so tounge twisters , and later thag day i booked room 14 to practice myself with the microphone so then i could hear myself propally and the exersizes sarah gave me to do i went and done them , and then practiced more songs